final video + feedback

technical strengths: 

camera work: *good eye shot *in focus *great angels *very good choice of angels
production design: *good typography
sound: *music was effective *good *the music was good

technical improvements:

editing/ camerawork/ production design/ sound *stronger script *the end was okay but i think there was a clip that wasnt meant to be there

overall i think people enjoyed the sound design of our video and liked the shots, the main thing people didnt enjoy was the script